The average prices per kilometre of clothing imported into the European Union from six different countries in 1993 and 2003 are shown in the bar chart below.
The bar chart compares the average prices per km of clothing that were exported from the six countries to the European Union in the year of 1993 and 2003. The data is presented in the unit of Euro Pound.
It is clear that the costs of clothing exported from European countries were much higher than that from their Asian countries counterparts. Moreover, Argentina and Brazil offered the most expensive clothing in both years.
In 1993, price of clothing from Argentina was in the dominant position, standing at staggering 28 pounds per km. Likewise, Brazil sold the clothing at about 23 pounds per km and that was the second most expensive clothing being imported into the EU. In stark contrast, numbering a mere 3 pounds, the price of Bangladesh clothing was the lowest.
In 2003, the clothing price per kilometer from each country varied greatly. While a slight drop in price from Argentina and Japan could be witnessed, China, India and Bangladesh's increased significantly, of which China clothing price grew by 7 pounds and overtook Japan's as the third most expensive clothing importer, reaching 17 pound per km. Lastly, the only country where the average cost for clothing export remained the same was Brazil, stood at 23 pounds in both years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... of Bangladesh clothing was the lowest. In 2003, the clothing price per kilomete...
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...xpensive clothing importer, reaching 17 pound per km. Lastly, the only country where ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, likewise, moreover, second, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00476190476 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53752338774 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3027922531 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.1 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37397152321 0.215688989381 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166896279689 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147822447528 0.0843802449381 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262691066876 0.15604864568 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112642912661 0.0819641961636 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.