The bar chart below shows the passenger kilometres traveled by different means of transport in the UK in 1990 and 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the passenger kilometres traveled by different means of transport in the UK in 1990 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates the distance the UK travelling by 5 various types of transport in a 2-year period.

It is noticeable that while the figures for bicycle and motorcycle users kilometres followed a downward trend, the opposite was true for the number of kilometres in total. Also, the distance of UK habitants going by bus was always the highest over the period shown.

In 1990, the UK travelled 100 billion kilometres and then went up to around 150 billion kilometres in the year 2020. Meanwhile, the numbers of bus and rail passenger kilometres were about 43 and 40 billion respectively. Over the following year, the figures for those followed a similar pattern, rising to 50 billion kilometres each.

Turning to the other categories, initiating at 3 billion, the distance UK people travelled by air showed a gentle increase of 2 billion kilometres over the next year. In contrast, the numbers of motorbike and bicycle user kilometres in the UK were the same in 2019, at approximately 4000 thousand each. At the end of the period, the quantity of those both marginally decreased by 1000 thousand kilometres at the end of the period.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...types of transport in a 2-year period. It is noticeable that while the figures ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97395833333 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84814887952 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1297805597 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.111111111 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151484508672 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722503362628 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463240333707 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10533758796 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362745103227 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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