The bar chart provides information about Australian men and women in various age groups doing regular physical activity in 2010 in percentage.
Initially women with age of 15 to 24 are doing more physical activity. Later it was reversed men with age of 25 to 64 are doing more physical activity than women.Finally there is a slight difference between men and women of age 65 and above.
To begin with 52.8% of men with age of 15 to 24 doing regular physical activity. Later it was fallen to 42.2% with age of 25 to 34 and again decreases to 39.5% with age of 35 to 44. Next it shows increasing trend of 43.1% and 45.1% with age of 45 to 54 and 55 to 64 respectively. Finally it rose to 46.7% with age of 65 and above.
The daily physical activity doing by men with age of 15 to 24 is 47.7% .Moreover it is increased to 48.9% and 52.5% with age of 25 to 34 and 35 to 44. Men with age of 45 to 54 hitting the highest percentage of 53.3 in2010 .After it shows decreasing trend of 53% and 47% with age of 55 to 64 and above .
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.13432835821 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44807361112 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427860696517 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7625669241 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316044327397 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164587679378 0.103423049105 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127368063053 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25990391074 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135177429071 0.0819641961636 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.97 11.4140731707 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.