The bar chart provides information about Australian men and women in various age groups doing regular physical activity in 2010 in percentage.
Initially, women with age of 15 to 24 are doing more physical activity. Later it was reverse men with the age of 25 to 64 are doing more physical activity than women. Finally, there is a slight difference between men and women with the age of 65 and above.
To begin with 52.8% of men with age of 15 to 24 doing regular physical activity. Later it was fallen to 42.2% with age of 25 to 34 and again decreases to 39.5% with age of 35 to 44. Next, it shows an increasing trend of 43.1% and 45.1% with age of 45 to 54 and 55 to 64 respectively. Finally, it rose to 46.7% with age of 65 and above.
The daily physical activity doing by men with the age of 15 to 24 is 47.7%. Moreover, it is increased to 48.9% and 52.5% with the age of 25 to 34 and 35 to 44. Men with the age of 45 to 54 hitting the highest percentage of 53.3 in 2010. After it shows a decreasing trend of 53% and 47% with age of 55 to 64 and above.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 33.7804878049 169% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.11848341232 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35980887316 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.402843601896 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.1614166718 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.4166666667 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312444925393 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150650624346 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11477839831 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26166721064 0.15604864568 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132732232644 0.0819641961636 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.2329268293 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 61.2550243902 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.32 11.4140731707 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.43 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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