The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The given bar chart depicts the ratio of various age group Australian male and female involve in regular physical fitness activities in the year 2010.
To begin with, the proportion of male is higher in the younger age by 52.8%, while after age increases the ratio shows the declining trend. Similarly, in 25 to 34 age group, there is swift decrease in ratio by almost 10%, and 39.5 is recorded in 35-44 age group of male. However, after 45 there is slightly increase in ratio and reached up to 46.7% at 65 and over but still less than women by significant portion.
Secondly, female age group of 15 to 24 was recorded 47.7%, while is lower comparison of male, while this is only age group that male has exceed female percentage. Moreover, there is continuous increase in ratio 55 to 64 age group. The percentage accounted for 25 to 34 and 35 to 4 age group is 48.9% and 52.5% respectively. While, 24 to 54 age group is recorded as the highest percentage age group by 53.3%, but with significant changes in 65 and over age, the ratio decline by roughly 6%.
Overall, as enumerates in graph, female ratio exceed male in all age group in fitness activities except in one. It shows that women are more conscious for their helth and fitness comparison to male.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'exceeded'.
Suggestion: exceeded
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59292035398 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48888200527 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517699115044 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0663374896 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275193634494 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127507177594 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080994264588 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198854050289 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898193016073 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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