The given graph provides information about the proportion of males and females of different age groups having physical activity regularly in 2010. Overall, it is readily apparent that more women than men performed regular physical exercise in the given year, except for the youngest group (15 to 24 years) where the proportion of males was bigger than females.
To begin with, more than half of men aged 15 to 24 exercised regularly in 2010, while women were only 47,7%. In contrast, the proportion of males aged 25 to 34 years old performed physical activity less than women (42,2% and 48,9%, each). Furthermore, women also dominated in the proportion of performing physical activity regularly in age groups 35 to 44, 45 to 54, and 55 to 64. In these groups, more than 50% of women performed regular physical exercise, while the figure for men was between 39,5% and 45,1%.
Additionally, the chart also showed that the proportion of males and females elderly having regular physical exercise was almost similar, the former accounted for 56,7% and the latter made up 47,1%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re for men was between 39,5% and 45,1%. Additionally, the chart also showed that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while, except for, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98882681564 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54105824377 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530726256983 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4516054154 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.571428571 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 5.23603664747 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307812239146 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166567770037 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541133330282 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20889881893 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681455663658 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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