The graph provides information about the proportion of males and females of different age groups engaging in regular physical activity in 2010. Overall, it is readily apparent that more women than men performed regular physical exercise in the given year, except for the youngest group (15 to 24 years old), where the percentage of males performing regular exercise was higher than females.
To begin with, more than half of men aged 15 to 24 regularly exercised, while only 47,7% of women did so. Conversely, the proportion of males aged 25 to 34 years old performed regular physical activity less than women (42,2% and 48,9%, each). Women also dominated in age groups 35 to 44, 45 to 54, and 55 to 64. In these groups, more than half of women regularly engaged in physical exercise, while figures for men were between 39,5% and 45,1%.
In addition, the chart also shows that the percentage of males and females elderly performing regular physical exercise was almost similar, with females accounting for 56,7% and males making up 47,1%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 62, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'exercised' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'exercises'.
Suggestion: exercises
...han half of men aged 15 to 24 regularly exercised, while only 47,7% of women did so. Conv...
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Line 2, column 443, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s for men were between 39,5% and 45,1%. In addition, the chart also shows that t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, if, so, while, except for, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95977011494 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47319491554 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2898494666 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.285714286 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 5.23603664747 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336079585147 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16705735619 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508261399869 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223000948756 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651339829776 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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