The bar chart shows the differences of men and women in doing regular physical exercises by percentage in Australia in 2010.
In general, females were more likely to do physical activities than males in Australia, and, in particular, in the age between 35 and 44.
Women aged 45 to 54 had a largest percentage in doing physical activity, at 53.3 percent, in contrast, men shown a smaller proportion in this age, with 43.1 percent of the total. Whereas young men had more passion for this kind of activity than women, with 52.8 percent and 47.7 percent, respectively.
It is clear that people aged 35 to 44 had the largest gender gap; over half (52.5%) women do regular physical exercises, which were significantly higher than men (39.5%). On the other hand, older people, whose age were more than 65, shown a similar proportion in doing this activity despite different gender, around 47%. There were larger percentages of women aged 25 and 34 and 56 to 64, at 48.9% and 53%, compare to men’s proportion, at 42.2% and 45.1%, respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...n 35 and 44. Women aged 45 to 54 had a largest percentage in doing physical ac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, in contrast, in general, in particular, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89887640449 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68814207487 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606741573034 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 3.36585365854 357% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.3316912275 43.030603864 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 124.571428571 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 5.23603664747 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326513863462 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17965255569 0.103423049105 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147994663212 0.0843802449381 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250012315315 0.15604864568 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168765182562 0.0819641961636 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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