The bar chart illustrates the proportion of Australian male and female who did exercise actively in six distinguish age groups from 15 until above 65 years old in 2010.
It is clear that the percentage of men who did physical activity was higher than the group of women except in 15 to 24 group of age.
In group of men, 45 – 54 age group was the highest proportion of group who keep their bodies fit regularly with 53.3% and followed by 55 – 64 age group and 35 – 44 age group accounted for 53% and 52.5% respectively. In contrast, group of above 65 was the lowest with 47.1% compared with the group of 25–34 as the second lowest with 48.9%.
In women group, youngest group, 15 -24 accounted as the highest percentage who did regular exercise with around 52.8%. Then, it declined gradually and reached the lowest point at group of 35 -44 with 39.5%. Moreover, it rose until 46.7 % at group of 65 and over. Interestingly, the proportion of men and women at group of over 65 had similar proportion about 46%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...–34 as the second lowest with 48.9%. In women group, youngest group, 15 -24 acc...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the youngest'.
Suggestion: , the youngest
...ond lowest with 48.9%. In women group, youngest group, 15 -24 accounted as the highest ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, second, then, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54594594595 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50157194192 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6049826699 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.125 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373314475882 0.215688989381 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176688056451 0.103423049105 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127218923216 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269495818255 0.15604864568 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845797950828 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.97 61.2550243902 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.5 10.3012195122 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.