The bar chart below shows the production of the world s oil in OPEC and non OPEC countries Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

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The bar chart below shows the production of the world’s oil in OPEC and non-OPEC countries.
Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The bar chart given represents the oil production in the three categories of countries - non-OPEC, Middle East OPEC and other OPEC - from 1980 to the present time and with a forecast to 2020.

From the data, it is clearly seen that countries of Middle East with membership in OPEC were producing nearly 3 million barrels of oil per day during the period from 1918 to 2000, whereas they are producing approximately 17 million barrels per day. Moreover, starting from 2000, other OPEC countries were involved in world oil production, and they contribution was almost five million barrels on day, compared with that, these countries will be producing only 2 million barrels per day to 2020.

Talking about non-OPEC countries, their contribution in world oil production was almost 6 million barrels per day, while, in contrast, they are producing as many as non-Middle East OPEC countries which is nearly 2 million barrels.

In general, it is noticeable that OPEC countries produced fewer quantity of oil from 1980-2000, however, their contribution increased and it is estimated to rise in the near future.

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Average: 6.7 (11 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, whereas, while, in contrast, in general, talking about

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17777777778 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75725651157 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.6072454258 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 186.4 112.824112599 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 22.9334400587 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.6 5.23603664747 298% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177937993297 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128363657179 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829336707496 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147922049419 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816426467507 0.0819641961636 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.2329268293 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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