The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011 The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one person households

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.

The percentage of English males and females from 16 to over 85 living isolatedly is depicted in the bar chart, while the pie chart illustrates the figure for bedrooms in those exclusive-occupant residents.
From an overall prospect, the highest figure of sole household owners was recorded in the group of citizens aging from 35 to 49. In terms of the pie chart, two-bedroom houses made up the most appreciable proportion, meanwhile that of 5 or more bedrooms accounted for the smallest portion of the sample.
From a quick glance at the bar chart, more than a half of people from 16 to 24 were single occupants which was remarkably lower than that of the group of 25 to 34 and 35 to 49 with over 60% simultaneously. On the contrary, in the following categories, as people got older, they were less likely to live alone. This trend was depicted in the statistics of the age group from 50 to 64 with exactly 50% when the last three groups accounted for under 40% and decreased gradually.
Moving on to analyse the pie chart, it is considerable thet two-bedroom residents were trendy in 2011 which contributed more than a third to the sample, followed by that of three bedrooms and one bedrooms with nearly 30% and accurately 28% correspondingly. Finally, the data of four-bedroom and five-or-more-bedroom households occupied by one person made up the lowest percentage - under 6% and 2% respectively.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so, third, while, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87447698745 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14331024647 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581589958159 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.0936525467 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.625 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.875 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24252361873 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106730759746 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634967838269 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158528711766 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056937460711 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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