The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information about the amount of produced and consumpted electricity in first ten countries in 2014 . All the numbers are given in billion kWH.
Overall, as we can see from bar chart, china and united states, two great industrial cities around the world, are by far higher in consumption and production during 2014. Also, the difference between consumption and production in Russia and Korea. Rep is less than rest of the given countries.
To begin with, US and china were the biggest producers with 5398 and 4099 kw per hour, respectively. While Russia , the third biggest producer, generated 1057 kwh following by japan and India which had produced 936.2 and 871 kw for and hour.
In terms of consumption pattern, all countries had higher rate of production compared to consumption with an exception of Germany. To elaborate more, China, Us and Russia ,the third biggest consumers ,used 5322,3866 and 1038 kw per hour. There were followed by Japan, India, Canada, and France with consumption rate accounted for 1,2,3 and 4 respectively. Additionally, the remaining countries including Brazil, Germany and Republic of Korea used less than 530 kw per hour.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, third, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1875 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76694193841 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630208333333 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3349812702 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5454545455 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175507014122 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705878416993 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907759650281 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125927147973 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859704338872 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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