The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The given chart compares the amount of electricity manufactured and consumed by ten highest-ranking nations in 2014.
Overall, the electricity production and consumption China was far higher than any other countries. It is noticeable that Germany was the only country that consumed more electricity than it generated.
In the year 2014, China and the United State ranked first with the production and consumption of electricity. In particular, Chinese produced about 5400 billion kWh and consumed nearly 5300 billion, this figure for the production and consumption in the United State were around 4100 billion and 3900 billion kWh respectively.
Turning to the other countries, we can see that the electricity manufacture and usage in Russia were the highest among 8 remained countries with the figure reaching over 1000 billion kWh each. Japan and India went after with the figures ranging from 700 billion kWh to 900 billion. The figure for the other countries showed a different in production and consumption by about 50 billion to 100 billion kWh. By contrast, German generated only about 526 billion kWh, however their use was up to 582 kWh.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26086956522 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85072869005 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4237541578 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218951776074 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10863123783 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058217526049 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149864013097 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359972108854 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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