The bar chart below illustrate top ten countries for the production and comsumption of electricity in 2014. First we can see, except germany all of another countries production more electricity than use them, so germany are special from the others. China are the nation which í use and create most electric in in the world and korea republic and korea are opposite in top ten, in top ten there are 4 nations from asia, 3 from americas and 3 from europe, that make me really thinks it equal for three continents in top ten. In the others side, africa have not in this bar chart so that illustrate the miserable life of residents in africa just think what happen if there are no internet and a few electric.
In conclusion, i think electric very important on our life so i hope africa will create more electric and develope their countries maybe their countries maybe come a big nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Suggestion: in
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun electric seems to be countable; consider using: 'few electrics'.
Suggestion: few electrics
...t happen if there are no internet and a few electric. In conclusion, i think electric very ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...net and a few electric. In conclusion, i think electric very important on our li...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... electric very important on our life so i hope africa will create more electric a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, really, so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61392405063 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48779266052 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601265822785 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.0321336378 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.8 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225884317045 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145381177202 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133848117914 0.0843802449381 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155716022623 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807502796866 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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