The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart gives information about the percentages of divorces in Finland and Sweden between 2011 and 2015.

According to the chart, since 2011 in Sweden there was the major number of divorces, except in 2015, when Finland overtaked Sweden reaching a peak of more than 40 percent. Over this 5-year period, in Sweden the divorce's rate increased until 2012, when peaked at almost 50 percent. Then it gradually declined to less than 40 percent in 2015.

On the other hand, in Finland the divorce's rate was at about 37 percent in 2011. After that it went down to 32 percent in 2012 and then it steadily rised reaching a peak of 41 percent in 2015.

Overall, Sweden was the country with the highest percentage of divorces since 2011, but Finland exceed it in 2015.

Votes
Average: 6.9 (95 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, then, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 637.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 135.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71851851852 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3053584625 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562962962963 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 173.7 283.868780488 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.07516682 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171920061189 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986937385598 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673514412681 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138189562894 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614091833234 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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