The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates, how many times in 1000s three computer packages were downloaded via the website in a period of five weeks.
Overall, it can been seen that the most popular package all these weeks were Active X and Java, by following a similar, increasing trend while Net, was the least used in comparison to the other two.
Packages of Active X and Java, were increased at a steady rate in the first three weeks. Apart from a slight fall for Active X in the week 4(15.000 times less being used ), they both finished at more than 80.000 times for Java being used and almost 125.000 times for Active X being used.
In contrast to these two packages, Net started with a steady falling rate until the third week with a low of almost 25.000 times being used. However, that changed the last two weeks by reaching a peak of more than 40.000 times being used.
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flaws:
No. of Words: 157 200
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 6 10
No. of Words: 157 200
No. of Characters: 685 1000
No. of Different Words: 89 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.54 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.363 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.069 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 37 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 24 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 13 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 6 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.904 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.519 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.83 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.163 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4