The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

This bar graph illustrates, comparative analysis of downloading rate of three computer packages Active X, Java and net in time frame of 5 weeks. It is clearly evident that Active X was the most popular, whilst, net remained the least popular amongst users.

To begin with, Active X and Java revealed the same pattern, both increased throughout the time span. However, download frequency of Active X remained significantly higher compared to the rest. In week 1, Active X started from 70,000, while, Java stood 20,000 lower. Active X showed significant surge in the coming weeks, with slight depression in week 4 and then reaching a peak of 120,000 in the fifth week. Java rose steadily finishing at slightly above 80,000.

On the other hand, Net was the least downloaded computer package. Started way below 40,000 in week 1 and declining further down reaching a low of approximately 10,000 during third week. Nevertheless, it showed significant rise after that and finishing the period around 50,000 download per week.

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was most popular, whilst, net remained least popular

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