The bar chart describes information about the proportion of people below the age of 15 or above 65 in the year 2000 and also gives projections for 2050 in five countries namely India, Indonesia, China, Korea and Japan, it also provides average of world in both years.
Overall, India had maximum number of dependents which position is projected to be held by korea in future. While, the least number of dependents were present in korea and its estimated that India will have least dependents after fifty years.
In 2000, The world population of children below the age of 15 and above 65 was around 25%. India had maximum number of dependents nearly 40%. Countries like Indonesia, China and Japan were similar in number of population of dependents at about 38%. In comparison with, Korea which had least dependents of just 22%.
The prediction of future states that the dependents on world level will increase upto 42% where as India is the only country estimated to fall by 6% of dependents compared to others Indonesia, China, Korea and Japan which may increase by 5%, 2%, 24% and 16% respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...sition is projected to be held by korea in future. While, the least number of dependents ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the least'.
Suggestion: have the least
...korea and its estimated that India will have least dependents after fifty years. In 200...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...pulation of dependents at about 38%. In comparison with, Korea which had least dependents ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the least'.
Suggestion: had the least
...ut 38%. In comparison with, Korea which had least dependents of just 22%. The predicti...
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...s on world level will increase upto 42% where as India is the only country estimated to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89893617021 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57637414055 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.4230027728 43.030603864 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.125 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232765904736 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978141266715 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549271129703 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142288605252 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054643429717 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.