The Bar chart shows the top ten countries for production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summarise the information by select the main features, and make comparisons when relevant.
The bar chart depicts amount of production and demand of electricity in different ten countries in the year 2014.
Overall, as represent in bar chart, almost all countries power exceed demand except German and China has the highest electricity production and consumers whereas, Korea republic is at last on the list.
To begin with, production of electricity is highest in China with 5,398 billion KWh and it was followed by united states with its 4,099 KWh production in 2014. However, expect these two big countries other countries production are less by more than by 4 times. Similarly, in Russia production was accounted 1,057 KWh and Japan was in forth position following Russia by 936.2 KWh. Whereas, Canada generated 618.9 KWh in 2014 which is approximately 60 KWh more thaF France. Brazil and Gemany remain at around same line with 530.7 and 526.6 KWh production. Korea republic is the lowest in generating electricity by 485.2 kWH.
Turning to consumption ration, as pe the bar chart there is similarity in production and consumption ratio. China and united states had the highest users in 2014, which is recorded 5322 and 3866 KWh respectively. In contrast, Russia experience almost same of production and consumption and Germany users are higher than production. Similarly, Japan, India and Canada consumption rate was 856.7,698.8 and 499.9 (billion KWH), which is lower than production. France, Brazil and Korea Republic experience same amount of consumers in 2014, where Korea Republic is the lowest consumption of electricity in 2014.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, similarly, whereas, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 3.97073170732 479% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28225806452 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80074503244 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495967741935 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3165156883 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.166666667 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206064454558 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953361181598 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810101433834 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172384610343 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770446164085 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.