The bar charts below show the marriage and divorce statistics for eight countries in 1981 and 1994.

Essay topics:

The bar charts below show the marriage and divorce statistics for eight countries in 1981 and 1994.

A glimpse at the two bar charts given reveals the information of rate of adjustment of marital status among eight countries in 1981 and 1994.

Evidently, United States had the highest marriage proportion in 1981. Numbering at over 10 per thousand, cases of new registration as legal couples slipped slightly to become 9 per thousand 13 years later. Denmark, which was the only country that witnessed a significant rise of matrimony, had its portion of married people raised from 5 per thousand to 7 per thousand over the period. The rest of the countries, namely, UK, Japan, Finland, France, Germany and Italy, saw a slight decline but maintained at about 0.4% to 0.7% on their marriage rates.

As of divorce rate, the proportion in United States still stood at high position of 4 per thousand and 7 per thousand in 1981 and 1994 respectively. Denmark shared a similar trend as U.S. with a negligible fall in terms of annulment. It is also interesting to note that while number of people getting divorced raised slightly in UK, Japan, Finland, France and Italy, number of break-up couples in Germany remained at the same of 2 per thousand in both years. Finally, the country with the smallest separation rate was Italy, which was a mere one fifth of that of the United States.

Overall, United States recorded a high on both marriage rates and divorce rate whereas the number of officially separated people was much fewer than their married counterparts in Italy.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, still, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9156626506 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64242989825 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570281124498 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1688804477 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.4 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150954454653 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683054230236 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766362534209 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119525110755 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870913144045 0.0819641961636 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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