The bar charts display the results from a 2009 survey regarding people s automobile in a European country

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The bar charts display the results from a 2009 survey regarding people’s automobile in a European country.

Submitted by rajpatel90 on Sun, 10/24/2021 - 12:14

The bar charts provide information about results from a survey regarding peoples’ vehicles in a European country in the year 2009. The data is in the percentage.

Overall, it is seen clearly from both graphs that the majority of citizens changed their car in every five years and second-hand cars had the highest percentage.

To comments with, as regards participants, who changed their cars in every tare accounted for nearly 1%, which was nearly a two-fold less than those who replaced their car in 2 years. Moreover, the rate of cars which replaced after three-four years and five years comprised closely to 35% and 52% respectively. Lastly, the number of citizens who never had a car and never changed cars was relatively the same with below 5%.

Furthermore, over 25% of people selected to buy a new car, which was 40% lower them secondhand cars. In addition, people who have chosen one option from buying new or second-hand cars was around 10%. However, the initial figure for people who do not want to buy a new one was approximate 2%.

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Average: 7.7 (2 votes)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, lastly, moreover, regarding, second, as regards, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85555555556 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63731532031 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4642490661 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1111111111 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170323667348 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909577980445 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18177749573 0.0843802449381 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167245182503 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.221134021021 0.0819641961636 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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