The bar chat below shows the amount spend on six consumer goods in four European countries.
The provided bar char illustrates how much money spent on six different items in four countries namely ( Britain, France, Italy, and Germany).Units are measured in thousand pounds sterling.
Overall, it can be seen that Britain is by far the most spending of money in all categories. The amount of money spend in photographic film is the largest in both Britain and France.Most countries spend the least money on personal stereos.
Looking at the data in more detail, it is clear that in terms of photographic films, the money allocate to it is the largest, which approximately 173.000 and 165.000 pounds sterling in Britain and France respectively. With regards to toys, both France and Italy spend the same amount pf money, at roughly 195 thousand pounds sterling. The expenditure of CDs in Germany is the lowest, while Britain the highest.
Turning to the remaining data, as is observed from the bar chart, the expenses of perfumes in Britain is exactly 160 thousand pound sterling following by nearly 153 thousand pounds sterling in Italy, whereas close to $145 of it spend by France.In addition to that, France spend about the same amount $145 for tennis racquets, although Britain spend more than it by 10 thousand pounds sterling. In terms of personal stereos, the amount of money spend by France and Germany is the same (148.000 pounds sterling).
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ereas close to 45 of it spend by France.In addition to that, France spend about th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04888888889 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65395488718 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511111111111 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.9499868352 43.030603864 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.0 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.125 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129963706937 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645281809806 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413205944037 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880580373248 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281803063492 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.