Cambridge IELTS 5 test 5 task 1
The line graph below illustrates the percentage of people in various nations those who were 65 years old and older from 1940 and gives prediction till 2040.
In overall, it is clear that the proportion in the USA and Sweden increases from 1940 to 2040, whenever sometimes also experienced a slight downward trend. Whereas, in Japan, it started decreasing from 1940 to1980 before a sharp rise in the number of elderly people by the year 2040.
Initially, in 1940, there were a higher percentage of older people living in the USA than Sweden, 9% and 7% respectively. In USA, there were a growing number of elderly people from 1940 to 1980 and decreased slightly by 2020. However, it is an expectancy that this figure will eventually rise until 2040. In the meantime, a similar pattern is also observed for the result in Sweden, the amount of aged population increased from 1940 to 2040, with two gradual fall about 2% from 1980 to 1990 and from 2015 to 2025.
Over the same period, the old people rate of Japan was the lowest among these three countries with only 5% in 1940. Then, there were a slow decline until around 1990 before rising steadily the same figure as in 1940. Nonetheless, it is forecasted to extremely rise more than double to 25% after 2020. In 1940, that will place Japan in the highest position of percentage of elders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'graphs'.
Suggestion: graphs
The line graph below illustrates the percentage of peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, nonetheless, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69491525424 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42592054512 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555084745763 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9482030629 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.727272727 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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