The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began

Essay topics:

The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began.

The Chart illustrates the information about men and women competing in the Olympics games and the line chart reveals date about participants in the four games from 1924 to 2012.

Overall, men participate in all the games then women, while at the female players negligible however by the number female participant dramatically increased. However, the number of players overall also had increased.

As we can see in graph, in 1924, 3000 male players compete in the games while the hardly seen in that year. 500 female players play games in 1952 and men was increased 3 times of total female, reached at 4500. In 1984, women increased three times of 1952 and men was more than 5000. Women had seen dramatic increase in 2012 which is more than three times of 1984 and reached 4800. While the men was gradually increased in 2012 and reached almost 6000.

In 1924 total number of players around 3000 and by 1984 it had risen gradually however 19840 to 2010 it increased sharply and reach more 10000.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79768786127 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36573714071 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514450867052 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.139194463 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2222222222 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0901564285854 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381898392839 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748762650052 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759094402336 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969236513775 0.0819641961636 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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