The chart and the graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca Cola Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below You should write at least 150 words You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

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The chart and the graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pie chart compares the percentage of sales for Coca-Cola for five different regions in 2000 while the line graph illustrates of share price during the period of six years.
Overall, according to the pie chart, the percentage of Coca-Cola sold in North America was the highest, the opposite was true for Africa and Middle east. Meanwhile, the amount of Coca-Cola share price increased significantly.
As can be seen from the chart, a fourth of Coca-Cola was sold on Latin America, which was followed by 16,4% and 20,5% in Asia and Europe respectively. North America had the highest figure with 30,4%. The proportion of Coca-Cola consumed in Africa and Middle East was the lowest with only 7%.

In 1996, the number of Coca-Cola share price was 40 dollars. After that, this figure witnessed a fluctuation, before reaching its peak in 1998 with 80 dollars. During the next two years, the number of Coca-Cola price decreased to the lowest point at under 50 dollars but fluctuated to nearly 60 dollars at the end of the period.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89142857143 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57774462407 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582857142857 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3609030686 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1111111111 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175797417911 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789360997866 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534303926676 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121614262799 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452238313668 0.0819641961636 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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