The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the statistics of total population whereas, the table depicts the total number of people over 65 years and their percentage in regards to total population of Japan over a century ( from 1950 to 2055).
Overall, the the number of people in Japan showed little inflation at the past and future of the period, though it kind of peaked at the middle (at present time) . The proportion of people 65 years and older rose significantly at present and forecasted to increase further in future and gradually will contribute a larger portion of total population.
In regards to the bar chart, the number showed little variation at the beginning and end of the period , which will just be over 5 millions. This figure gradually increased starting from 1955 to 2005 with an growth of 4-6 millions until 1985 and after that period 1-2 millions in every 5 years and finally reached the peak of 127.8 millions in 2005. Then, the numbers of people started to decrease 125,4 millions in 2015, which is further predicted to decline 110 and 89.9 in the year of 2035 and 2055 respectively.
On the table, it can be seen that in 1950 the total number of people aged 65 and over was 4.1 millions which will be 9 time more in 2055. Accordingly their percentage is also showing similar trend on the table which is 4.9% and 41.0% respectively. In the year of 2005, the data represented one fifth of total populations which is 25.7 millions. On the other hand the forecast for year 2035 is total population 37,2 millions contributing 34% .
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Accordingly,
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...opulation 37,2 millions contributing 34% .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, if, so, then, whereas, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 269.0 196.424390244 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75836431227 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58618735824 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501858736059 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.0 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5489130296 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0767079195305 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349445846309 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293901864802 0.0843802449381 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560230874102 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232112315273 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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