The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia Summarize the information by selecting nd reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia.
Summarize the information by selecting nd reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given bar chart and table illustrate travelers at a certain holiday resort in the country of Australia.
Overall, the travelers from Asia occupy the highest percentage, while the visitors from other areas the lowest. It is also noticeable that the Asian and American tourists share the same holiday activity but have different choices in other categories.
In terms of the pie chart, the Asian tourists come first at 37%, being followed by the European ones at 35%. The travelers from the USA is about half of those from Asia. The tourists from other regions constitute the smallest proportion of the pie chart, at only about one fourth compared to the Asian travelers.
As regards the table, the European tourists hold the most days of holiday length: 16 days, and the Asian ones the fewest: 7 days. The other two groups have below 15 days. About the types of accommodation, the tourists from Europe and other places prefer camping or caravan, while the other two groups like staying in the hotel. About the holiday activity, both Asian and American travelers are sightseeing lovers, while the other two groups like outdoor activities.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, as regards

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43841949656 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549738219895 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1419976666 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154579099455 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071843620254 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572073551873 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114943832473 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664552096272 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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