The chart below give information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.

Essay topics:

The chart below give information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of boys and girls who participated in various sports in New Zealand in 2002.
It is noticeable that there were significantly difference between boys and girls who took park in most of those sports. However, the percentage of boys and girls played Basketball and Tennis were similar.
Among girls, the percentage of girls playing netball was just over 25%, slightly higher than that of girls enjoying swimming, at about 22%. Approximately 8% and 7% of girls played Tennis and Basketball. While 6% of girls took part in Soccer and 5% of girls participated Marital arts and Cricket. Finally, the proportion of girls enjoyed other sports to reach around 10%.
In contrast, a mere 1% of boy played Netball, which was the lowest recorded figure. The sports with the highest participation figure were Soccer, Swimming and Cricket, with nearly 25%, 13% and 12% respectively. These were followed by Marital arts, Tennis and Basketball which had figures of between 11% and 8%. About 10% of boys took part in other sports.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, so, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03428571429 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6939084723 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582857142857 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5923692889 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0909090909 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148434621173 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617588542068 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643876292196 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112132679574 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812755945707 0.0819641961636 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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