the bar chart compares the percentage of children who spend time with their family.
Overall, it is clear that the figure for children living with dad and mom was the lowest. By contrast, the number of children spending time with dad was the lowest during the period show.
Around 2 hours, the infants take for their father to play or communicate on the weekdays. In addition, the people aged 6 to 9 accounted for 1,5 hours every day with dad. While the number of time the children take mothers between 2 and 4 hours on a daily basis. Above 9 hours from young adults took up or both dad and mom over the period show.
We can see that the figure for children spending time with dad was lower, with by 1 hour. Whereas, from 2 to 4 hours children living with mother on the weekends. Similarly, the percentage, of age between 0 and 9 spend a lot of time around 10 hours with their parents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...was the lowest during the period show. Around 2 hours, the infants take for the...
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...ime with dad was lower, with by 1 hour. Whereas, from 2 to 4 hours children living with...
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...the weekends. Similarly, the percentage, of age between 0 and 9 spend a lot of ti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
similarly, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 725.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36746987952 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27886876562 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536144578313 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 9.23255111007 43.030603864 21% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.5 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284481137001 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138680061219 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100564857103 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223790683561 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1000159997 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 61.2550243902 145% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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