The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
Leisure time in a typical week in hour- by sex and employment status, 1998-99.
The given bar chart compares the leisure time that is owned by male and female from different employment status – Full time employed, part-time employed, unemployed, retired, and housewives – in a typical week in hour in 1998-99. Overall, as it is clearly seen in the graph, the male has more leisure time than women however in some categories male did not have any recorded data.
In that period, the biggest leisure time was enjoyed by unemployed and retired people at the same level. In details, male enjoyed leisure time about 85 hours while the female was slightly below the male which about 79 hours. In addition, full time employed also recorded that male has more leisure time than female about 43 hours and 38 hours respectively.
On the other hand, the category of part-time employed and housewives have recorded that female has leisure time of about 40 hours and around 50 hours respectively or slightly above full time employed. These data cannot be compared to the male due to there is no data available.
Comments
The bar chart compares the
The bar chart compares the amount of free time devoted by males and females in five different occupational statuses. It is noticeable that men used more free-times than women in three categories (full-time employed, unemployed and retired), while women dominated the remaining categories. We can also see that both men and women who unemployed and retired had more spare times than the others.
The number of men, who worked full-time job, could spend over 40 hours during the week for leisure time activities. This amount was fewer than those who unemployed and retired that spent over 80 hours weekly. By contrast, there were no hours that spent by men who worked as part-timer and housewives.
In contrast, the number of hours spent by women’s housewives and part-timer took lead over the men’s, at 40 hours and 50 hours in a week respectively. Turning to full time employees, women could spend their free time just below the part-time employees. While the amount of hour used by unemployed was similar with retired people in the same gender, which accounted for more than 70 hours weekly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: Fulltime
...male from different employment status – Full time employed, part-time employed, unemploye...
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Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ly below the male which about 79 hours. In addition, full time employed also recor...
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Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...male which about 79 hours. In addition, full time employed also recorded that male has mo...
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Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...50 hours respectively or slightly above full time employed. These data cannot be compared...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88571428571 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43645778347 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8603530287 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324096260183 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161877466681 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920051355441 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238118463767 0.15604864568 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458811999274 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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