The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales in various formats of film from a particular store between 2002 and 2011 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales( in various formats) of film from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the quantity of rentals and sales of films per year according to various formats from a typical store over the period from 2002 to 2011. The general overview here is that the number of rentals and DVD sales always surpass the rest by more than two times.

To specify, the number of films rentals went down slightly from 185,000 in 2002 to 152,000 in 2005, before a more significant decrease to 58,000 in 2011. In comparison, DVD sales followed a different pattern. The number of DVD sales climb sharply in the first 6 years from 48,000 in 2002 to the highest point of 212,...

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