The given bar chart provides information about the number of million tons of rice
produced yearly by 4 different nations over 3 years 1995, 2005 and 2015.
What stands out from the chart is that the total amount of rice created in all three
years of the two countries A and B has reached a larger scale than that of the
other two nations. While rice production in A and D increases over the years,
countries B and C tend to fluctuate.
Looking at the chart for more details, the annual rice production of country A was
the highest among countries, this figure leaped steadily each year and until 2015
it peaked at 50 million tons. Along with this upward trend, in country D the
amount of rice generated in the first 2 years remained stable at 2 million tons, but
later increased slightly by 2 million tons.
Besides, the rice production of country B ranked the second, which oscillated in
three years and touched the highest point at around 48 million tons during 2005.
Country C had an annual rice production was 5 million tons in 1995, then 10 years
later it rose slightly to 7 million tons and in the last year it fell to the same level as
the first year.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, look, second, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54205607477 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33566341947 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551401869159 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.526470899 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.857142857 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5714285714 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 3.83414634146 391% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310811713593 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162785607635 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515412348924 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112106681911 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914162144936 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.87 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.