The chart below shows average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities.

Essay topics:

The chart below shows average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities.

Given is the chart illustrating the timetable of both genders on different types of activities.

It is clear that people in the UK spend the most time sleeping. By contrast, playing sport is the category receiving the least expenditure.

Sleeping is occupied the highest number by females, in 8 hours and 18 minutes per day, while the figure for men is significantly lower than 14 minutes. Women and men have time for resting and personal care for nearly 1 hour. As can be seen that both men and women spend more than 1 hour for dining; social life and entertainment/culture. While it takes 2 hours and 50 minutes and 2 hours and 25 minutes for men and women respectively to watching TV and listen to music, the activities for hobbies and sport is short, especially for sport, there are only 13 minutes and 7 minutes per day respectively.

A noticeable fact is that people set aside to read, take care of children, do volunteer work or meeting and other things made up a mere minority of time every day, all the figure are under 1 hour. For males, they take part in all leisure; employment and study are higher than females, in 5 hours and 25 minutes; and 3 hours and 45 minutes respectively. Conversely, women spend time doing the housework accounted for more than half of the time of men, in 3 hours. For traveling, men, and women have quite the same time, over 1 hour.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 6.8 279% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 247.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59109311741 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78173892234 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554655870445 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6098888019 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.090909091 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143878801494 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613636442416 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497175693449 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972234325323 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465904554807 0.0819641961636 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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