The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000.

Essay topics:

The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000.

The pie chart reveals the distribution of budget that was spent by UAE government on various categories in the year 2000. Data is presented in the unit of AED dollar.

It is clear from the chart that AED government spent over 300 billion of national budget on the nine key sectors. Moreover, a significant percentage of expenditure was spent for social security and social services.

As shown in the information, expenditure on Social Security sector was in a domainant position in the national budget, standing at a staggering value of 100 billion. Likewise, constituting 53 billion, Health and Personal Social Services sector was the second largest budget allocation sector. In stark contrast, transportation saw negligible support from the government, with a mere 9 billions spent on this sector.

Evidently, the rest of budget was distributed on many diverse sectors. While Education comprised 38 billions of the total budget, just a half (17 billion) was spent for Law and Order. In addition, UAE government spent practically identical amount of budget for Defense and Debt interest at about 22 billion. Lastly, the rest of sectors and Other expenditure which was not specified in the chart spent some 13 billions and 23 billions respectively.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '38 billion'.
Suggestion: 38 billion
...erse sectors. While Education comprised 38 billions of the total budget, just a half 17 billio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, likewise, moreover, second, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25870646766 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96649274497 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572139303483 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0027991272 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0909090909 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248506885169 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108338590857 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793884114774 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179039295958 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461570584964 0.0819641961636 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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