The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000

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The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.

Submitted by Thien on Fri, 08/26/2016 - 21:36

The bar chart depicts how many tourists using three types of airports in New York City from 1995 to 2000. Overall, the number of visitors using Newark and LaGuardia airports rose, while the figure for John F airport fluctuated. It is also clear that the LaGuardia was the most popular airport over the period of 6 years.

In 1995, New York City witnessed the highest level of visitors using LaGuardia airport, at approximately 35 million of passengers. Jonh F Kennedy was the second with just above 25 million of passengers and only 15 million of passengers using Newark airport. By 1997, the number of travellers using John F Kennedy, LaGuardia and Newark had risen steadily, at just over 45 million and just over and under 40 million of passengers respectively.

During three years later, LaGaurdia airport, which was the most widely enjoyed, saw a significant increase in the number of travellers with a peak at 70 million of passengers in 2000. In contrast, the number of travellers using John F Kennedy and Newark airports had remained stable over the period of 3 years, despite a drop of 30 million of passengers using John F Kennedy airport in 1999.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)
Essay Categories
IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'in contrast']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.311926605505 0.268076937826 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.0963302752294 0.116061578633 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0321100917431 0.0759168565197 42% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0550458715596 0.0366838410393 150% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0045871559633 0.0131127313244 35% => OK
Prepositions: 0.178899082569 0.155750635184 115% => OK
Participles: 0.045871559633 0.0379272487307 121% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65290007122 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0045871559633 0.0210936926555 22% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0733944954128 0.0948980150116 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00917431192661 0.00967000014798 95% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1160.0 1161.00487805 100% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.9 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85858585859 5.90752243213 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73763899035 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353535353535 0.337110787985 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.262626262626 0.247514529752 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176767676768 0.171178102325 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106060606061 0.112407865282 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65290007122 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505050505051 0.546246751206 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.5302925575 49.3433353143 88% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 24.75 23.0094962315 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1820670078 42.9750493124 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 135.714022679 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 23.0094962315 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.689975730869 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 51.0126262626 47.7609492067 107% => OK
Elegance: 3.44117647059 2.94281807926 117% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471920304941 0.418131533498 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.199501166828 0.181151798455 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0880004924833 0.0850326197045 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.710520954308 0.706616315825 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0886678984432 0.157042692854 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.2721625039 0.228904883108 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909694888416 0.108899403657 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.465897568305 0.367819155151 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0939804426594 0.0812612215331 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.381963808712 0.316326947829 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792322363811 0.0921553760075 86% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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