The given column graph illustrates the information about proportion of adults of varying ages in United Kingdom who used Internet on daily basis between 2003 and 2006.
overall, it is clear that usage of Internet services was maximum among youngsters over the given period ;however, old aged spent less time on using Internet. Interestingly, senior citizens started using Internet in 2004.
To begin with, proportion of young ones who used Internet in first two years was equal which accounted for three fifths. During 2004, figure soared by a fifth, but in next year, followed by a dip and reached at 90%.In case of 25-44 age group, there was only a half of adults who used Internet in 2003 ;whereas, figure inclined and reached at nearby 90% till 2005 and in next year witnessed a minor drop.
Probing further, 60% of middle aged person used Internet during initial year then figure grew and after two years reached at above 80%. In respect of persons aged between 55-64, about 30% and 50% of persons used Internet in 2003 and 2006. Surprisingly, there was no use of Internet by old ones in 2003 and only about a fifth of people used Internet in later years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...adults of varying ages in United Kingdom who used Internet on daily basis between...
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...asis between 2003 and 2006. overall, it is clear that usage of Internet serv...
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...and 2006. overall, it is clear that usage of Internet services was maximum a...
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...r, followed by a dip and reached at 90%.In case of 25-44 age group, there was only...
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... Probing further, 60% of middle aged person used Internet during initial year...
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...n used Internet during initial year then figure grew and after two years reached...
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...ar then figure grew and after two years reached at above 80%. In respect of per...
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...ars reached at above 80%. In respect of persons aged between 55-64, about 30% an...
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...s no use of Internet by old ones in 2003 and only about a fifth of people used In...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, then, whereas, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79207920792 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34157892533 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594059405941 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3960884495 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290111548613 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144682453985 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502835106406 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19455627184 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382653078122 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.