The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The bar chart illustrates information about ratio people who had leased their house and own house In England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

Overall, with the time the of owning house increased and the ratio of renting house decreased by the time. However, people living in their house and rented house was equal in 1971 in England Wales.

The graph shows that the percentage rented house was on peaked just above 75% in 1918, with in a year, it had fall down almost 68% in 1939 and continue to stable until 1953 came, when again it shown downward trend for next 30 years gradually and reache just 30%. In next 20 years it started to recover it, the number of rented house show upward trend.

The ratio of people owned house was at his lowest point around 22% in 1918 and it increased for next years. between 1939 to 1953, the ratio was steady at 31% and then for next years the ownership of house had seen growth, in 2001, it had touched the highest point and then trend goes downward.

To sum this, Both trend are opposite to each other.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'fallen'.
Suggestion: fallen
...ove 75% in 1918, with in a year, it had fall down almost 68% in 1939 and continue to...
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Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Between
...n 1918 and it increased for next years. between 1939 to 1953, the ratio was steady at 3...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46875 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.94652356602 2.65546596893 73% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572916666667 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4334645843 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18296328809 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837198450809 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619776339673 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099584180365 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744812067085 0.0819641961636 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.96 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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