The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The given bar chart depicts the proportion of owner-occupiers and lessees in the UK and Wales over 93 years period. It is clear that the rate of renters significantly deflated, while the other dramatically crawled over a given period. Furthermore, before 1971, there were more lessees than ownership. Thereafter, the reverse was true.
According to this bar, about more than 20% of the freeholders were in 1918. Nevertheless, not until this proportion began to rocket in 1971 did it become the same as that of the leaseholders, at 50%. Then, continuously, the percentage of owned residents who swelled and reached its peak was in 2001, at nearly 70 percent. Then, there was a small deflation, which was roughly 65% in 2011.
On the other hand, there was approximately 75% of households leased accommodation in the beginning year of the given bar. Afterward, this slid significantly and hit a trough at about more than 30% in 2001. However, then, its rate which shot to between 30% and 40% was in the last year of the chart.
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Anyone give bandscore and feedback for my writing test above pls
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, then, well, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86285714286 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95443492301 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8521451714 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3636363636 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115360186179 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381171493999 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371976221135 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729395478576 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216883745679 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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