The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.

The bar chart compares the proportion of men and women teachers in six different categories of educational setting in the UK in 2010. From the general perspective, it could be observed that nursery/pre-school and elementary school were popular among female teachers, while the university was the best choice among male teachers.

It is evident from the information provided that nursery/pre-school had the highest percentage of women teachers at over 95% and there also was a large gap between men and women, in which women teachers' percentage exceeded men teachers' percentage by roughly 90%. Similarly, the number of female teachers in primary school was more than male teachers, at over 90% compared with under 10%.

On the other hand, the majority of men teachers chose to teach at the university at 70%, in which men teachers' percentage exceeded women teachers' percentage by 40%. In addition, the percentage of female teachers was bigger than male teachers by about 10%, in contrast, men teachers' percentage in the private training institute exceed female teachers' percentage by 10%. Especially, the percentage of male and female teachers in college was the same at 50%.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...rivate training institute exceed female teachers percentage by 10%. Especially, the perc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so, while, in addition, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28191489362 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00905435365 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505319148936 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.279322932 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.857142857 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 5.23603664747 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331142618677 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185646721797 0.103423049105 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1094128099 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22954150655 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533447110372 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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