The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The pie charts illustrate the water usage by six places in the world with various reasons such as (Industrial, Agricultural, and Domestic use).

Overall, it is by far that water was widely utilized on Agriculture among the six areas given, except for North America and Europe which was in the Industry. Domestic use remains stable.

It is noticeable that the biggest point of water consumption was on Agriculture which started to nearly a whole of the total in Africa, Asia, and Southeast Asia, while South America was around three quarters. The industry used recorded data of around a tenth of its overall total except for North America and Europe.

Meanwhile, the highest usage of water in North America and Europe was on Industries with nearly half of the total. The Domestic had the least figures which noted on six places of the world, these were about a tenth in Africa, Central Asia, and Southeast Asia, whereas North America and Europe had 13% and 15% respectively. South America itself had around a fifth of its consumption .

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, while, except for, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50925456482 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525714285714 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3448423645 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170140893191 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827040198559 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668910537543 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130944779169 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692777450876 0.0819641961636 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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