The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by reporting and selecting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart given illustrates the distribution of coffee consumption habits due to the survey among Australian residents in five metropolia last month.
Overall, the largest number of citizens in all cities tended to go out for drinking coffee, whereas the lowest percentage belonged to the group of people who bought fresh coffee, the result of buying instant coffee was slightly dominated.
Regarding the picture, in Melbourne and Hobart, nearly 65% of people went to a coffee shop, followed by 61% in Sydney, 55% in Brisbane, and 50% in Adelaide. The proportion of using instant cafes was a little lower, around half of the citizens in Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart, then under 50% was the result in Sydney and Melbourne.
Finally, the proportion of fresh cafes consumption had witnessed the lowest data. Sydney was the city which had the highest purchasing percentage, 44%, gradually decreasing in ordered was Melbourne, Hobart, Brisbane, and Adelaide, with 42%, 37%, and 34% equally respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 34, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cafes'' or 'cafe's'?
Suggestion: cafes'; cafe's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, regarding, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7804844452 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6125 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4130783645 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.333333333 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13679194906 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648731032574 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620276726801 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893716325757 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615747676704 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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