The chart below shows the total number of minutes( in billions) of telephone calls in the uk divided in to three categories from 1995- 2002.
The given line graph depicts, the various types of telephone calls (local fixed line, national and international fixed line and mobile calls) in U.K. between 1995- 2002.
According to the chart , local fixed line was the highest calls while mobile calls were the lowest in U.K. On the other hand , local fixed line was fluctuated dramatically throughout the period. Although, between 1998- 1999 year were shown approximately same minutes. Particularly, national and international fixed line was increased gradually over the period. Conversely, between 1997- 1999 years were indicated roughly same calls minutes in U.K. It was just under a 50. Obviously, mobile calls were soared progressively middle of the year while first period climbed slightly. Mobile calls were illustrated significantly same minutes from 1995- 1998. Overall, local line was higher than other calls fixed line in U.K. Especially, three types of calls line was climbed end of the period.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n 1995- 2002. According to the chart , local fixed line was the highest calls ...
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...ile mobile calls were the lowest in U.K. On the other hand , local fixed line was...
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...re the lowest in U.K. On the other hand , local fixed line was fluctuated dramati...
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...ted dramatically throughout the period. Although, between 1998- 1999 year were shown app...
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...cated roughly same calls minutes in U.K. It was just under a 50. Obviously, mobil...
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...gher than other calls fixed line in U.K. Especially, three types of calls line wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, if, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42953020134 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67121485447 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530201342282 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3564913284 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.125 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136178798292 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719077155436 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060514207647 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122568881386 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00862029703282 0.0819641961636 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.