The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years

Essay topics:

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their
undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five
years.

The pie chart describes destinations of anthropology students from one university after graduation, and the table compares salaries they are offered after five years of working.
It is clear that being full-time workers is the most common choice among Anthropology graduates. Overall, students who work as freelance consultants and government staff receive more money than those in private companies after 5 years' work.
As can be seen from the pie chart, around half of anthropology students in that university did full-time work after graduating, followed by part-time workers and jobless students with 15% and 17% respectively. The percentages of graduates choosing to study full-time postgrad programs and doing part-time jobs while learning further on slightly lower, 8% and 5%, respectively. Significantly, 8% of the sample are unknown.
Turning to the table, the majority of freelance consultants receive more than $75000 - $99000 and 40% for above $99000. Meanwhile, 50% of workers working in the government sector are offered a salary of over $100000. $50000 to $74999 is the salary for the highest percentage of those who work for private businesses (35%).

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42777777778 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95768515366 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627777777778 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2119804792 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.555555556 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239039797074 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900783899555 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107961899153 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163400516727 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115524698436 0.0819641961636 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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