The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course The table shows the salaries of anthropologists in work after five years

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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of anthropologists in work after five years.

The given chart on the prompt demonstrates the destination of Anthropology graduates from a university after graduation, and the table presents the Anthropologists' salary ranges included job categories. The chart divides into six categories, and the table contains three types of jobs.
Almost half of the students did full-time jobs after their graduation. After graduation, 23% of students continued post-graduation, while 15% started part-time jobs during post-graduation. 12% of graduates didn't get any work, and others destination was unknown.
In the job field, government sector employees get higher salaries than the other two sectors. After five years, 50% of government job holders' salary is more than $100,000 whereas however, 30% of employees of the private sector get this. Though 40% of freelancers are paid more than 100 thousand, the same amount of people are in the range of $75000-99999. Private companies provide less than $75,000 to 45% anthropologists, but only 20% of people get this amount in the freelance consultants as well as the Government sector.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'charts'.
Suggestion: charts
The given chart on the prompt demonstrates the destinat...
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Line 2, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... full-time jobs after their graduation. After completing graduation 23% of students c...
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Line 2, column 212, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...s during post-graduation. 12% graduates didnt get any job and others destination was ...
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Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ployees of the private sector get this. Though 40% of working people from freelance co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45505617978 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07005381064 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612359550562 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8038881354 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.888888889 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211826691043 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921759336149 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932003754569 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154578785734 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870180082778 0.0819641961636 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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