The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart indicates the percentage of different destinations for Anthropology graduates from a certain university. Meanwhile, the table gives the spread of salaries for anthropologists who have worked for five years. Looking from an overall perspective, most of the graduates get a full-time work. And anthropologists in government sector are likely to earn more than those working in other sectors after five years.
As to the destinations of Anthropology graduates, while 52% of them work full-time, only 15% take a part-time position. Compared with 8% of graduates engaging in full-time postgrad study, merely 5% choose to pursue postgrad study with a part-time job. Lastly, 12% of graduates remain unemployed after graduation.
When it comes to the salaries for anthropologists after working for five years, the spread of salaries intervals differs from various types of employment. For freelancer, 80% of them earn above $75000, among which 40% freelancers gain between $75000 to $99999, and the other 40% earn more than $100000. Only 5% earned between $25000 and $ 49999, while 15% with salaries from $50000 to $74999. Anthropologists employed by the government are entitled to higher salaries. 50% of them have salaries above $100000. The percentages for goverment employers who earned $25000-$49999 and $500000-$74999 are the same as those for freelancer. Compared with the other two types, most of anthropologist work in private corporations earn $50000-$74999, with only 30% of them gain above $100000. (236words)
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$49999'.
Suggestion: $49999
... 00000. Only 5% earned between 5000 and $ 49999, while 15% with salaries from 0000 to 4...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, look, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42307692308 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0887403396 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4465809022 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6428571429 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17066449723 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712705823623 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538634536755 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129858508854 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650103741028 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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