the chart shows the components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000
The bar chart illustrates the ratio of gross domestic product from two main industries in United Kingdom in between 1992 and 2000.
Overall, as per the chart, both industries were in upward trend throughout the year, while the IT industry remain higher all the time.
To begin with, at beginning service industry was accounted just 4% contribution on GDP, whereas IT exceed this, at roughly 7%. Over the next four years, the levels were more similar and contribution were approximately 7% and 9% for service and IT industries respectively in 1996, It was still little higher than Service industry. But the ratio of IT was mildly decreased from 1994 to 1996.
However, afterward we can see the noticeable increased in IT Industry contribution on. UK national GDP. In 1998, IT upsurged at 12% and nearly 15% in 2000, whereas service industry remain at almost same level and end with 8% in 2000. At the end of the period, It exceed service industry by almost twice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...upward trend throughout the year, while the IT industry remain higher all the time. ...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'exceeds'?
Suggestion: exceeds
...just 4% contribution on GDP, whereas IT exceed this, at roughly 7%. Over the next four...
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Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ational GDP. In 1998, IT upsurged at 12% and nearly 15% in 2000, whereas service ...
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Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'exceeds'?
Suggestion: exceeds
...% in 2000. At the end of the period, It exceed service industry by almost twice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, still, whereas, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90303030303 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63375001062 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624242424242 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.2396933328 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8888888889 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155788219753 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812032650849 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928494716096 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104106153755 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715338791704 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.