The chart illustrates the percentage of GDP increase in UK from 1992 to 2000. Both the IT & service industries are increasing the trend for GDP. In comparison IT industry is booming more than service industry. The IT industry is contributing 15% in year 2000 & service industry grown up to 8% in last 8 years. IT industries are having too many opportunities for youngsters & it is also growing the GDP.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
... increase in UK from 1992 to 2000. Both the IT & service industries are increasing the...
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Suggestion: comparison,
...es are increasing the trend for GDP. In comparison IT industry is booming more than servic...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'The' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: The; IT
...is booming more than service industry. The IT industry is contributing 15% in year 20...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 33.7804878049 27% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 331.0 965.302439024 34% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 69.0 196.424390244 35% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79710144928 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.8821214171 3.73543355544 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00767408392 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 47.0 106.607317073 44% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68115942029 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 96.3 283.868780488 34% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 13.8938835464 43.030603864 32% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.2 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.8 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133924763522 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849233498861 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957223466672 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133924763522 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 13.0 40.7170731707 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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