The bar chart illustrates data on the changes in the rate of employed people who were in various sectors as opposed to that of those from the unemployed community in America in 2003 and 2013.
A closer look at the chart shows that the rate of employees in education training, hotel industry, building, and self-employed areas was increased substantially. Meanwhile, the remaining fields witnessed a downward trend throughout the observed period.
More specifically, despite starting at below 5% in 2003, the percentage of people involving in the hotel industry rose dramatically to roughly a fifth, reaching a similar level to those in education and construction fields in 2013. Additionally, the rate of people setting up their own businesses experienced a three-fold growth, from 10% to 30% which was six times higher than that of those jobless in the final research year.
On the other hand, the proportion of people joining the business area witnessed the biggest decline of 20% and remained at approximately 28% compared to only 5% that of the unemployed community in 2013. A similar downward trend can be seen in the medical field, with a rate of one-fifth in 2003, decreasing sharply to only 10% after a decade.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11940298507 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97376797313 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577114427861 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.4271616313 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15721214352 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687705769499 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615236138077 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991235718286 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437452583597 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.