The charts and the table illustrate the health status and the percentage of nutritional components in rations of two distinct groups of students.
Overall, group A predominantly eats cereals, while group B is prior to consume food with a high fat content. Moreover, the general health of group A seem to be better than group B.
Regarding two pie charts given, the proportion of greasy food in group A accounts for 30%, which is smaller 20 % than that in group B. In addition, the share of fish and cereals in both of groups are similar, with 5% for the former and 35% for the latter. Besides, the figure for vegetables in group A outnumbers that in group B, with 22% and 5%, respectively. As for the remainder, the gap between two groups are negligible, with 8% in group A and 5% in group B.
On the other hand, according to the table, the share of student being overweight and illness in the past year in group A just accounts for nearly a half than group B, with 15% for the former and 32% for the latter. In contrast, the percentage of attendance in classes in group A was remarkerably larger than group B, with and three quarters, respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
.... Moreover, the general health of group A seem to be better than group B. Regarding t...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A account' or simply 'accounts'?
Suggestion: A account; Accounts
... the proportion of greasy food in group A accounts for 30%, which is smaller 20 % than tha...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, with 8% in group A and 5% in group B. On the other hand, according to the tabl...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'account'?
Suggestion: account
...llness in the past year in group A just accounts for nearly a half than group B, with 15...
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Line 4, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s remarkerably larger than group B, with and three quarters, respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, moreover, regarding, while, as for, in addition, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53846153846 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69876818941 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495192307692 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7656843388 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.888888889 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 5.23603664747 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152881904647 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880884923991 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414063001268 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113728774088 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235741408647 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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