The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.

Essay topics:

The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.

The line graph compares the numbers of tourists travelled to the UK and British people went abroad from 1979 to 1999 while the bar chart illustrates the most favorite countries where UK people visited in 1999.

Overall, there was an upward trend in both figures of the British citizens went travelling to other countries and people from overseas visited the UK during the period shown. Additionally, France was the most popular country among the British.

Regarding the line graph, in 1979, 10 million foreigners travelled to the UK while there were a bit higher in the number of UK people went abroad for a visit, at about 12 millions. Both figures then increased sharply, and reached over 50 million UK journeys overseas which was nearly double the journeys to the UK (about 25 millions) in 1999.

Looking at the bar chart in detail, in 1999, there were roughly 11 million UK visitors to France, which is the highest figure among five countries. In contrast, Turkey was the least favorite country, accounted for only 2 million UK journeys. The second popular country was Spain, with approximately 9 million people, almost doubled and tripled the figures for the US and Greece respectively.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, regarding, second, then, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.005 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52997529632 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2519869486 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.125 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349889439416 0.215688989381 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156713711623 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621888036141 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220101566331 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438124795546 0.0819641961636 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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